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Use 3rd
person. (e.g. "The team discovered…" not "We discovered")
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Change
expletives such as there are/it is/that was into active. (e.g.
"Three days remain…" not "There are three days remaining…")
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Use active
verbs instead of passive. (e.g. "The team voted to…" not "The vote was
passed to…")
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Use active
verbs instead of "to be" verbs. ("The group agreed often" not "The group
was often agreeable")
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Edit out
unnecessary repetition and wordiness. ("The group avoided conflict" not
"Conflict within the group was not really an issue when it came to this
project")
Get it in writing:
What style problems did you have in your group's project proposal
that you'll avoid in your project report?
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