Writing with (Business) Style
  • Use 3rd person.  (e.g. "The team discovered…" not "We discovered")
  • Change expletives such as  there are/it is/that was into active.  (e.g. "Three days remain…" not "There are three days remaining…")
  • Use active verbs instead of passive. (e.g. "The team voted to…" not "The vote was passed to…")
  • Use active verbs instead of "to be" verbs. ("The group agreed often" not "The group was often agreeable")
  • Edit out unnecessary repetition and wordiness. ("The group avoided conflict" not "Conflict within the group was not really an issue when it came to this project")

Get it in writing: What style problems did you have in your group's project proposal that you'll avoid in your project report?


 


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