The Second Method

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    The second way to integrate quotations into your text uses actual quotation marks; hence, it shows more of the other author's words and ideas in your prose.  With this style, you take a key phrase (part of a sentence) or a key sentence and weave it into the flow of your sentence. So if someone were simply to hear and not read your paper, he or she might not be able to tell where your voice ends and the other author's voice begins.  This tends to be the preferred way of integrating quotes, as it demonstrates sophistication and style. And as always, you give credit to the other author when you borrow his or her words.

Example:

Let's use the same quotation we had before:

 Nonetheless, we do have an SA race to consider, and a big one at that.  A whopping six candidates want a shot at next year's presidency.  Each has vowed to make the SA respectable once again--an uphill battle considering all they've been through this year.  That's why our choice of leadership is extremely important.  We can't just haul off and vote for the first name on the ballot. That would be impossible. It changes several times a day.


        Gaby, Josh.  "Vote for Anderson, more fun."  Northern Star [DeKalb]. 22 Mar 2000:13.

One:

Though all the candidates for this year's SA presidential election promise to improve the SA and make it respectable again, this may prove to be "an uphill battle considering all they've been through this year" (Gaby 13).
Notice:
    a) the citation contains both the author's name and page number
    b) the citation comes after the quotation marks and before the period
    c) there are no ellipsis ( . . .) before we begin quoting nor afterwards.  Ellipsis show where information has been left out, but they are unnecessary at the beginning or ending of a quotation. It is assumed that you are leaving something off.

Two:

This year's election is considered to be one of the biggest with a "whopping six candidates . . . That's why our choice of leadership is extremely important" (Gaby 13).
Notice:
    a) because information was left out in the middle of a quotation, we must use ellipsis.
    b) once again, the citation information remains the same.
 
 
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